Kind of loving (inspiration for opening credits)

This is the opening title sequence for 60s film Kind of loving. although it is not the same genre as my opening sequence, i wanted to see if i could get some inspiration from the way they showed their credits in the 60s.

I wasn't very taken by the way the credits were shown, i didn't expect a lot but i though there could be some ideas i could use. However i do like the use of the sound bridge that occurred with the wedding bells. It is a good way to get the audience wondering.

I do have some criticisms to make about the way the credits were shown. For example when the title of the film was shown it was white, in front of a white dress, so the title couldn't really be seen. I know the colour can not be changed due to the lack of development in technology, but it could have been placed at a different  place.